Could any local English speaker please minister to me near this?
I have to convey an email for finding new roommate. The posting is here and the second one is what I'm gonna write. Could anyone please expurgate on the second one? I would like to be as polite as I can be and also friendly.Thanks for your give a hand!
"Nice room available in house, inert location near Bloor Stn. Share house near 2 guys (Oz & Ind) . $700 plus deposit, utilities (no key money).
Todd"
"Hi Todd, How are you?
My describe is Krzysztof. I live in Vancouver right in a minute and am looking for a place to live in Toronto from the first time of March. I will live in Toronto until October of 2009.
Could I please run a look your room on the Tuesday of 29th in the evening? I'm going to Toronto in the future on 29th and have to move about back to Vancouver within the day so I enjoy to leave Toronto at smallest at 8PM.
My email address is here
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Thank you for your time and have a worthy night Todd.
Best regard.
Krzysztof"
Answers: Todd,
My name is Krzysztof. I am getting prepared to move from Vancouver to Toronto, and would like to out of harm`s way a place for March 1st. I am interested in taking a look at the room you enjoy available. I will be in Toronto on January 29th and would resembling to meet near you in the evening earlier 8pm. If you have any pictures you could email me, it would be much appreciated.
Thank you extremely much, and I look forward from hearing from you!
Krzysztog
email address
I hope this help!! Good luck!
This is what we write as a note. It is a upright note. I would translate one paragraph...
I am coming to Toronto for one day on the 29th of (??) February (?) and must be going away by 8PM for my return to Vancouver. Could I please take a look at your room within the late afternoon, or rash evening of the 29th?
Otherwise, you did good!
Krzysztof, it certainly sounds ok. If I were to variety changes, here's what my change would say. I be born and raised within America...so this would be American English.
"Hi Todd, How are you?
My name is Krzysztof (pronounced Kristoff). I saw your trailer listing a room for rent contained by the Toronto area. I currently live contained by Vancouver but I'm planning to move to Toronto. I'm looking for a place to live in Toronto, starting March 1, 2008. I plan to live surrounded by Toronto for 1-2 years.
Could I please take a look at the room on Tuesday, January 29th (preferably during the afternoon)? I'm going to be contained by Toronto for just in the future on the 29th.
My email address is aaaaa(a)aaaaa.aaa. Please let me know if that date works for you. Also, please consent to me know what time would work for you that day.
Thank you exceptionally much.
Best regards,
Krzysztof
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123-456-7890"
Good sites for home rental listings?
Every site I visit isn't bringing subsidise anything, and I know there enjoy to be SOME homes for rent! lol What are some good flush sites?Answers: err... rent dot com
in southern ca, there's la times, recycler, and westside rentals.
I rent an apt. surrounded by Villa Park IL innkeeper controls fry. BUT its so cold I can see my breath!! Who can I christen??
So basically, I live contained by an apartment in Villa Park and my tenant is a complete jerk. Our buidling warmth is totally controled by him but it gets so cold surrounded by my apartment that sometimes I wake up and I can see my breath. My neighbors adjectives have like peas in a pod problem and one of them is PREGNANT. Their heat never get higher than 53. I've asked my hotelier to fix it, both neighbors have as powerfully and he just say there is zilch he can do about it. Is at hand anything we can do or anyone we can call? PLEASE HELP!!Answers: contact this structure below (Metropolitan Tenants Organization)- they have lots of information nearly your rights - they are more geared towards the City of Chicago proper, but have info also just about the state of Illinois. I am sure there is some despoliation of law going on:
I looked up the municpal code of Villa Park:
"Section 602.3 Heat supply (page 17): Delete entire booth and insert "Section 602.3 Heat supply. Every owner and operator of any building who rents, lease or lets one or more dwelling component, rooming unit, dormitory or guestroom on lingo, either expressed or implied, shall uphold a temperature of not smaller amount than 68 degrees F at any time during the year surrounded by all liveable in rooms, bathrooms and toilet rooms."
This information can be obtained from the Villa Park website: http://www.invillapark.com/code/index.ht... and will association you to "municode" website.
Perhaps also call the Villa Park settlement hall and ask who to speak to give or take a few reporting a heat despoliation. http://www.invillapark.com/index.htm
I found the page that links to where you can complain in the region of rental violations - http://www.invillapark.com/cdce.htm
Good luck to you - landlords can be the worst!
I am sorry you are going through this gibberish -as I have be through it myself. In the meantime, to keep yourself heat, buy a portable heater.
It's simply horrible for a proprietor to expect someone to live in a freezing cold apartment as if they would want to remuneration for that themselves!
Call the local "license & Inspection" agency in your town-or housing authority. Most endorsed temperature restrictions in the winter are 65-68 degree. If your landlord is responsible, and he is not maintain the heat, you can report a complaint-anonymously. They will then do an investigation. Your manager could be fined if he is found to be renting a unit to be precise unhabitable. I witheld a portion of my rent money until it was fixed 2 weeks subsequent. I of course, contacted trial aide in my county to see what my endorsed limits be. I found a way to add the missing heat + electricity and gas from the stove I have to use to heat my apartment. Call legalized aide, I highly recommend it. Landlord's resembling this do not care in the order of their tenants. There is a describe for them-Slumlords. If your heat is included next to the rent, the landlord is repsonsible. If he is not upholding his train of the deal by supplying bake, then HE is breaking the lease.
I would start looking for a trial place ASAP! You don't want to deal next to another winter like this again. Trust me I know. I run for the hills simply before winter come around again. Coincidentally, It was also one and the same time my lease was up.
Good Luck!